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by tinamonic

schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what goes around - comes around...
don't you agree?
Wonderful chapter - thx mate,
~jacks_peapod~
person freelke
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful as always. you are consistantly wonderful to read. Please post again soon, I check very often
person Haley
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think AWE was wonderful! I was so happy that Will was out of the picture for most of the time. I swear she should go have some fun with Jack while Will is gone. I know she is still wondering what it wouldve been like to fuck him and everything that goes with it. I know I would. I , however, would not have picked Will in the first place...

Anywho, I absolutley love your story!!! Awesome job. Please please please post soon!!!
Cant wait to see what happens next. I swear to god that if Lizzie doesnt go with jack, I will strangle her.
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!!!!!! I was so happy when I saw this updated. I've missed your story alot, please please please update soon! Loved it!
xxxx
person Lady
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're sorry for the W/E part!!! Im an avid J/E fan but i would have liked that scene to go further. I almost screamed when you switched back to Jack, (would've if my older bro wasnt home lol)
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First I was a little bit concerned about W/E, but I trust you for
more J/E. However I can't see a way that Jack and Liz come together again.
...poor Jack - I think I know what you're planing next (let you know if I was right!!!)...
Thx for this wonderful story
~jacks_peapod~
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I straight up admit it: I cried. Lol, your fanfict is just amazing. I was so amazed when I saw you had updated and I wasn't disappointed! Amazing chapter, great character development. Worth the wait.
Please update soon :] I miss J/E but how on earth are they going to sort this out if Jack is leaving and Lizzie is with Will? Hmm...you're a great writer, I'm sure you'll suprise me =D
Again, well written, I love your story!
xxxx
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I have waited for this update 2 weeks now, and by God, it was well worth the wait. I have to say I still love the contrasting points of view. I totally love your story, one of my favourites actually. I hope you like your comments I leave haha I try to make them good but I suck at writing. But yeh anyway, that woman...hmm...Im gonna go read it again about another 100 times hehe. At first I thought Lizzie was going to run to Will and have sex with him,in hope Will would tell Jack and make him jealous >=] Haha Im evil! I hope you update soon, I wanna know what happens! Please dont leave it too long, I'll get withdrawal symptoms =[
Great story!
chelsea x
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! Oh no! What ARE they doing?!?!?!?!?
You better continue that - what a heartbreaking chapter - excellent work, mate!
~Saskia~
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bangs head against table* NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!! Why do they both have to be so stubborn? Your chapter had me in tears again! Please update soon Im dying to see what you have coming up! I had the feeling Jack was gonna smash the gift or maybe Lizzie would but I guess Jack wants it as a souvinir? I hope they make up and I hope Jack realizes she isnt just a bed buddy (cool saying!)
Great writing, characters are really in context and emotions are there! Please update soon I think Ill die if i dont find out what happens soon lol
xxxx

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