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NO no no no no no no!!!! You are evil! What a place to stop lol, Im now dying from curiousity about what comes next. *mumbles about being fanfict obsessed*
Anyway....great chapter! I loved it; the emotions in it were great, the characters were in context and you could just feel exactly what the characters were thinking and the different points of view were great! But the one question is; Will Jack and Lizzie still be together after this night? They both need to realize they want each other; Jack needs to acknowledge she's not just a bed buddy and she needs to realize Jack does have feelings and her being with the Whelp breaks his heart!
Amazing fancit, update quickly!!!!!
chelsea x

Eeek, Lizzie's got herself in a mess. I hope Jack does forgive her though and gets his present, Im sure he'll love it. Cant wait for more!
chelsea x

I really like your story. Your writing style is awesome, and I love how you stay true to the characters personalities. I look forward to reading more!

hello !! I'm french and I love your story !!! I hope read another chapter soon !! Bye !!

Awwh, i feel so sorry for Jack. Lizzie is playing them both, not on purpose ofcourse, its not her fault she doesnt know what she wants. But you could literally feel Jacks heart breaking. I hope they settle it!
chelsea x

Ah the suspense! Silly Lizzie, really... there is only one choice. Ach... falling back in love with William, nooooooo! Anyway, now that my sparrabeth outburst has subsided, I love your writing, can't wait for more! ;D

please update with another chapter soon, I love this story

Love the story so far, you have such great love scenes! I really hope Elisabeth dumps Will because I can't stand the guy. Jack and Elisabeth are the best couple. Look forward to reading more.