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omg ur killing me with chapter 51..and i hope that jack isnt doin this to elizabeth..that would totally just kill j/e lol..but im glad will isnt with her thank god lol

and i was also thinking that u should make this into a story get it published..i would totally buy it =] lol cant wait to read more

Oh my gods I'm entranced by this story, I did nothing in my free time for 2 days than read your story, I'm SOOO happy Will finally walked away, I was just ranting at my computer for just ever about the love triangle lol, anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

What can I say: Man Eater... It's goin' great and I'm sure that Dear Ol'Jack won't do anything stupid. Let me see.. Lizzie collapsed, so 1)Jack will find her,and take care of his precious Lizzie. She'll recover and tell him she's So over with Will and that she's Only his...let me see what maight happen after that...Oh YES he'll make love to her..(No way, that sounds too whelppy)let's say he'll make her his all over again(Nooo...)..Fine then he'll simply fuck her!; 2)Dear William will find her, get all panicky then call Jack to save his damsel in distress & in the meantime they'll both realise HoW much they love each other(that was ironic) and kiss and make up..(blah) BUT that was just a joke couse I was in a good mood and was inspirated by the chappie ;D. So I need some more soon and please don't make us wait another few months!

Farewell!

That was intense! I was actually celebrating because of the fact that Will broke up with Lizie but then... Oh my, what happened to her?

Even though I fully agre with Will that she acted like a whore, I pity her now. Will is gone( thank God for that!) but what about Jack?
What was he doing with the wenches??? And who is going to help Eizabeth???o_O

You are a master of cliffies, my friend^^ Great job:)

HUGS!!!

I can't believe Jack betrayed Elizabeth! Omg please post the next chapter soon!

Yay! Another chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next! :D

Yay! Great chapter! I wonder who's child is Elizabeth pregnant with?

Updated at last! Wonderful chappie and it only increased my appetite for more.I guess Lizzie is pregnant but how will she discover who the father is? Not William hopefully.I don't think he may have kids as an eunuch btw^^. What does he want to talk about with her???Curiosity is eating me!GRRRR!

Thanks so much for crediting me for that tiny little help :)You can always count on me!

I'm glad your writer's block is gone.I hope that reading of this chapter as well as a couple of hot J/E youtube vids will kill my own writer's block that is clutching me so tightly. "Rescue me, Jack!" lol!

Please update soonest!Is there another bonus chapter coming soon? Earthshaking J/E sex is the best writer's block killer^^

OK... Hot. No not Hot like hot, but VERY HOT... When I reached the part with the seasickness I closed the window, so I could stop reading. When I cooled down I finished the chapter. Please, I beg you, tell me Elizabeth is NOT pregnant, because if she is I'll be absolutely smashed(not that it won't be about time for it, but still;)... And about the earth shaking chapter I CAN'T wait for it!!! I love you, this fic rules!

That was great! Really hot! Post the next chapter soon! :D