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Now that's what an earthshaking ,rough ,pirate sex is!YAY! That's my Jack,oh yes.You got me trembling and flushing with this bonus,Sweetheart!
Lizzie is such a lucky lass,oh my...She and Jack are like made for each other :D I'm waiting for the angsty update now!

I love you and this fic! It is absolutly breath-taking...

COME ON! I need to read the next chapter!!!! Your story is amazing! :D

OMG! Nice chapter! Can't wait for the love scene :D

I enjoyed this chapter in every possible way! It was lots of drama ,it was very hot towards the end and funny too-all these things in one chapter!The conversation between Jack and Gibbs was priceless.Hillarious!My favourite part:

"Just so you know Mr. Gibbs, Ms. Swann prefers rough, earth shaking pirate sex. She enjoyed it...and so did I. So next time when you so happen to accidentally witness me shagging Lizzie, close your old ears and mind your damn business.”

Haha,I always assumed that she likes it rough and earth shaking!What a great line from Jack^^ He's so perfectly in character:)

Keep going,Sweetheart! I'm waiting for the bonus!

wowowowowowow i love it i love it soo much i hate wiill so much he is so emotional argh wheres jack!

FINALLY i really want will to find out

NOOOOO I FINALLY REACHED THE LAST CHAPTER U WROTE nuuuuu im no sad please update sooon

"my sunny side has up and died im betting that when we collide the universe will shift into a low" its red hot chili peppers lyrics to the song wet sand it reminded me of the moment when jack and Lizzy eyes met why couldn't jack have left without will that pussy i hate him argh i hope theirs more jack/Lizzy in the future

Yay im sooooo excited to read this story i looked at this summery and im like "ohh this sounds good" and than i looks at how many chapters yo had and i was soo happy