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by tinamonic

schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow,that was worth the long wait!Beautiful chapter and I'm so happy that Jack was not attracted by Lilliana in the way both me and Lizzie had suspected! I must confess that I've had terrible suspicions about her...I even thought she may have been Jack's ex and that her son was ...his child!...Oh what a relief :) ^^

I loved ,absolutely admired the part about "Kama Sutra" and Jack's notices on its pages.That was sooooo perfectly Jack!^^

Keep going,Sweetheart!Hugs,

Addicted to Jack
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good stop point-I wanted to scream so loud that the entire neighbourhood can hear me! Great chappie(as always).Keep going and update soon please.
P.S. I'm a junkie and the fics are my drug;)...
person queenhenide
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A new chapter! I've been waiting so long for this! Keep going and post the next chapter soon! :D
person dana
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I especially liked the part where lizzie found that book in Jack's shelf about all the positions lol how about the next sex scene it has lizzie finally doing the position that Jack would love to do ;)
person luvsyou
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FICC!!!
i just hate the waiting..
it makes me feel so powerless and helpless.
I can't ease the pain untill you write the next chapter!!
please write moooree!!
I have a bad feeling towards the girl...
I was over-whelmed with drama.
but now I miss it.
even though....
if nothing happens...
at least there was suspense..
right!?!?!?
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! more please!!!
person queenhenide776
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When is the next chapter going to be up? This story is just amazing! :D
person rosaseravo
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, if Jack does have eyes for another woman it serves Elizabeth right for trying to have two men at one time! ;)
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it,hun!!! So much suspence...Is Jack interested in another woman??I don't think ...Or is he?
Anyway it's great that Lizzie is now jealous,haha!
Fantastic chappie,luv! More,more,more!
person queenhenide776
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another chapter! Can't wait 4 the next one! I wonder what's going to happen...