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by tinamonic

schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I admire the way Jack talked to the whelp,lol! And that he reminded him of the broken bed,haha!
Great job on this chapter! It took my breath away!
Is Lizzie pregnant? I can't wait to discover who the father is ,but I have my assumptions.(Eunuchs can't have children after all...^^)
That ship coming closer to the Pearl doesn't let me have my peace of mind.What ship is that?Pirates?Navy?...???
Please update as soon as you regain your strength after the party :)
Hugs^^
person Ayla
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!This is one of my favourite chapters.Your Jack was great as always(*saying "your Jack"I mean the way you write him,of course,because beyond any doubt and what everyone knows-Jack is mine,naturally ;)I also have to mention I loved how you described Will!Lol,he's such an ass...100%in character!Bravo.Please keep writing.
P.S.As about William's affair,I wouldn't be surprised if the fair haired lass turned out to be a fair haired lad :D
Greetings to all Willabethans :DDDD
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!What a chapter!!!I read it on ff.net and I loved it but here it's even hotter ^^

I enjoyed the whole J/E goodness in both chappies- 42 and 43.Steamy stuff!I found meself drooling :) My poor laptop...

I absolutely love the way you portray William.For different reasons^^Firstly,he's as annoying and asexual as in the films,secondly I personally hate him!Keep it up!

Btw,Ayla is my sis^^
Hugs!
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah It's a really good chapter ! I love it !! I will waiting you update !! Soon please !
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay new chapter! loved it and i cant wait for more :D
person Stacey
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this fic. i read it once then re read it, it was that good and also cos i didnt wanna stop reading. update asap or ill just die if i dont find out what happens lol. 10/10 :D
person tasha
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love this story. Update soon.
person tasha
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Hurry up and update.
person missdanielle
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutlely looveee your storyy, cant wait to read moree =]
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was damn hot! Ufff...I need a cold shower ^^
You really know how to write smutty stuff,I loved it :)
Some more bonus chapters?Pretty please?^^