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for ManEater

by tinamonic

person zonuz
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!! as I had hoped:-D Can't wait to read more
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh that was so hot. ;D

Wish I was Elizabeth. Lolz.

My favorite line was when Elizabeth said "...anyway you want to..." only because I started to sing Love Today by Mika and I love him. =]
person Addicted to Jack
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was worth the wait!!!I was drooling while reading,and now I'm out of breath...Jack is divine,isn't he????
Hehe,we all know he is.And this chapter proves it;)
person Addicted to Jack
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I totally forgot to praise you for J/E lovemaking against the wall!I loved it...oh...*drools*
Only few authors would let Jack and Lizzie have their way this way.So tinamonic big,big thanx to you for that!!!
person lizzieSwan
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing.
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where's the new chapter? I want the new chapter!! *bounces*

schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*scream*
Don't stop there *snif*
That was so wonderful. I really looking forward for the next chapter.
Plz update soon - I can't wait too long,
hug Patricia
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much I enjoyed this chapter!It was so hot...oh I'm breathless...
I've read this chapter on ff, and I've noticed with anger,that all "M" rated fics no more appear in the main index..
Please send the bonus soonest!
person JessSwann
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great !! this chapter was beautiful !! I love your story , it's my favorite !! I can't waiting for reading the love making chapter !! Jack & Lizzie are so beautiful together !! (hem did I mentionned I'm a sparrabeth shipper ?? )Update soon please!!
person johanna
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it, please dont take ages to update though.....i love ur story