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for ManEater

by tinamonic

person freelke
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm so glad you posted this chapter. I love reading on this site, much better than email!
person Saskia
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IM DYING!!! hope u had a great christmas and new year!! keep writing because ur extremly talented and i relly enjoy reading your stories!!! x
person JessSwann
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter !! so beautiful thank you very much
Hope you will update soon
person howlongmustiwait
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just want her to make up her mind already. She can't have both and it's not fair to be stringing Jack along like that! Makes me quite ill really. And Jack based on her wishywashyness is doing the right thing - trying to move on - trying not to be lured to her again. So ready for some resolution - hope the whelp did see them, gets mad and leaves!
person Gary
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Update....Im dying Here
person Haley
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i seriously thought they were going to have sex and i was going "finally" but then gibbs had to interupt...dear god
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a really wonderful chapter.
I like the description of emotions between them.
I hope they will come together again^^
thx pat
person Sasha
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG im soooo happy you dont understand!! let them kiss!!! great story i love it, i think longer chapters are best but that might just be me coz i love reading your story and if its longer thers more to read lol!! keep it up, please dont be long i cant wait 2 see what happens xxx
person nmos
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yayy. this was a good chapter.
and longer chapters.
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter, and I will admit I was dquealing into my pillow in nervous anticipation. Nice to see they've made up (sort of) and kind of glad they didn't do anything yet. It seems too soon. Can't wait to see what you have in store and any sort of chapter is fine by me aslong as its posted quickly :D
Thanks for the quicky update :)
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