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Hhhmm, I don't like the sound of this other clan. They seem they'd go off at an insect being killed near their boundaries. I hope they don't return.

Isn't young love beautiful!

Love the chappie.

Hey, this story is nicely written. You've done a good job introducing your key characters and slowly building up their development. I look forward to more of this one.

You have the making of a great story here so please continue.

I like what you're doing with the story, Zel. The first chapter really set up a great background for Anthea, and the second chapter's setting description and revealing more about Anthea, Ko'tak and Kro'nha were excellent. And now, with this chapter we see a bit more involvement between Anthea and Kro'nha. Very interesting. Looking forward to reading more when you are able to update. ^_^

Glad to be inspiration, but it’s not as if you needed it. Your writing is very fine, wonderfully descriptive. Good deal.

This sounds very interesting and I would like to read more.

I just have one request. Please space out your paragraphs. Sometimes when stories are written like this I am afraid if I lose my place I will never find it again. Spacing makes it easier to read.

I hope this helps you. FAB

I'll remember to do so. ^_^ It helps very much so. Thank you for your review.