rate_review Reviews

I would love to read the rest of this story. I like it.

Great story here! I read the first few chapters a long while ago, and I was completely elated when I checked again on a whim and saw that you'd updated. Thank you so much, keep up the amazing work and please please PLEASE update soon!
cheers!

I absolutely love this story. It has a great unique plot, and I also love Devon's character. She's a different OFC that I haven't seen before, particularly because I was getting quite sick of reading stories about proper ladies turned bad. I love that Devon is bad from the start. You do a great job characterizing everyone in the story, actually. Also, I particularly enjoyed your dialogue - it's very convincing and realistic. What I would like to see soon is perhaps another encounter with Lee, or at least contact with him via letter or something of that nature. He is mentioned from time to time, but I want to see an interaction between he and Devon sometime soon. I'm addicted to the story and I can't wait for another update! Great work!!

Hello! I just found this and absolutely love it! :) Is there anymore? I'd love to read the rest of it.

hey is there going to be anymore to this? I have been waiting for so long but nothing has been done. I really hope there is coz i love the story so far. Please pretty please finish the story

i just found this story and i read it all in like a day!!! I totally love and i cant wait for more... this cant be the end!! there hast to be hot sex between these two!!! hahah i cant wait!! oh and i love Devon!!! shes great!!!