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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm still around enjoying this story. I still like it. Poor Obi-Wan. lol. Arsha is definitely taking the man on a wild ride. I just hope he wakes up soon and can set her straight, or get rid of her. I kinda like her, but I don't want her to hurt Obi.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I like the passion between them. It's really good and pretty well done and believable with the characters. It doesn't seem like sex for purely smutty reasons. It is like what happens in relationships.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so right about Obi! He's such a cute clueless thing though, isn't he? I just wanna pinch his cheek and then maybe make out with him a little bit...but that's beside the point ;)
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I especially liked the part in which she tapped into Obi's mental conversation with Anakin and his confrontation with her on it. Nicely done. Although, I am curious to know if she was once a padawan herself and who the person was that came in.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh So he finally realizes something's up...Obi-Wan may be a sexy beast but he sure is kinda slow sometimes...
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...I am so jealous...I don't know what I'd do if I had Obi-Wan (or Ewan ;) ) in my bed...
Let's just say I'd probably attack him. Lucky for him he's not :P
Sorry, just loved this part, wanted to comment before I moved to the next chapter.
Let's just say I'd probably attack him. Lucky for him he's not :P
Sorry, just loved this part, wanted to comment before I moved to the next chapter.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* Wasn't expecting that encounter in the shop.
I love it! Keep it up hun, it's great so far, and you didn't just jump into a random smut scene, so that's nice :P
...though I wouldn't mind a good smut scene with Obi *nudge nudge wink wink*...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I love it! Keep it up hun, it's great so far, and you didn't just jump into a random smut scene, so that's nice :P
...though I wouldn't mind a good smut scene with Obi *nudge nudge wink wink*...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Look forward to finding out more about Arsha. Seems that she has a past that she really would rather escape from depite the act she is putting on for Obi.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Keep up the good work!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Obi. He really is getting a number pulled on him and can't even see it.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading. It's getting more interesting with each chapter.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading. It's getting more interesting with each chapter.