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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now this was fucking fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i have never read this pairing before but it interested me so i decided to read.... now i think i may be a pile of goo on my floor...not good...oh well it was worth it!
you gotta write more!!!!!!!
of anything just please keep writing hot stuff like this!
i have never read this pairing before but it interested me so i decided to read.... now i think i may be a pile of goo on my floor...not good...oh well it was worth it!
you gotta write more!!!!!!!
of anything just please keep writing hot stuff like this!
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jesus fucking Christ. So very, very hot!
My Catholic-school-educated heart died of happiness when the rosary came out! And then my brain just utterly stopped working anymore with the blowjob at gunpoint. Love, love, loved the gunplay, and the fact that it was "cross-emblazoned handgun" gunplay only made it hotter! :)
I have to say, speaking as a former guilt filled Catholic (it's just what we do) and a current big, kinky pervert, you write really great, authentic dialogue! Constantine's shame and self-loathing ("Welcome to hell, you suicidal faggot!")are so real and so hot, and so is the way he takes his disgust out on Balthazar! And then his total lack of aftercare and his holier-than-thou (lol) indifference (wiping himself of on Balthazar's clothes and then just throwing them at him...gah!)are such realistic heartless-top "scene is over!" behavior.
So, in closing, this story is awesome, you are awesome, and I totally want to see a real scene just like this. Hell, I want to *have* a scene just like this! ;)
My Catholic-school-educated heart died of happiness when the rosary came out! And then my brain just utterly stopped working anymore with the blowjob at gunpoint. Love, love, loved the gunplay, and the fact that it was "cross-emblazoned handgun" gunplay only made it hotter! :)
I have to say, speaking as a former guilt filled Catholic (it's just what we do) and a current big, kinky pervert, you write really great, authentic dialogue! Constantine's shame and self-loathing ("Welcome to hell, you suicidal faggot!")are so real and so hot, and so is the way he takes his disgust out on Balthazar! And then his total lack of aftercare and his holier-than-thou (lol) indifference (wiping himself of on Balthazar's clothes and then just throwing them at him...gah!)are such realistic heartless-top "scene is over!" behavior.
So, in closing, this story is awesome, you are awesome, and I totally want to see a real scene just like this. Hell, I want to *have* a scene just like this! ;)
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mhmmm that was pretty hot. Kept waiting to see who would end up winning. Curious to see a 2nd chapter, maybe in hell?
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alleyway-sex, playing with rosaries, a tied-up Balthazar...what more could I ask for. This was simply hot and I'm actually at a loss for words, so fucking great. And I loved the bit about Balthazar fucking Lu. That is something I can totally picture.
I hope you write more, because it's definitely good.
I hope you write more, because it's definitely good.