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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finish rereading this and damn! I miss it and I wold really love it if it was updated, but I'm not going to hold my breathe. I just wanted you to know that there's a fan out there, ready to read whenever ^^
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic. I like it A LOT.
It's clear, to the point with a good and strong start and the smut has a reason.
It's also hot, sensual, strong and powerful. It affected me with such a force that it caused my temperature to rise and shivers to race up and down my spine as I read it.
The portraying of characters was perfect. I also see Will as the submissive type - he has to be so strong and in control when dealing with the wordl, it's no wonder he would be more than happy to give up the control to someone else while in private. And fire has a habit of being uncontrable, so I'm not sure if Will could control Warren even if he wanted to.
I also loved all the details, like Warren's bodyheat. It made me want to curl up next to something warm ^-^
And I'm so in love with this fic that I don't WANT to find any fault in this. But when I'm feeling like being honest to myself I have to admit that the last part, the actual sex, bugs me. I'm conflicted by it. The flying was a little out of the woods for me, some way totally unnecessary, but in a way it also gave something extra to the scene.
I'm not sure if it's a bonus or a minus, so I think I'm just gonna go blind, close my eyes, and just love this fic.
Because it's so SHINY and pretty...
It's clear, to the point with a good and strong start and the smut has a reason.
It's also hot, sensual, strong and powerful. It affected me with such a force that it caused my temperature to rise and shivers to race up and down my spine as I read it.
The portraying of characters was perfect. I also see Will as the submissive type - he has to be so strong and in control when dealing with the wordl, it's no wonder he would be more than happy to give up the control to someone else while in private. And fire has a habit of being uncontrable, so I'm not sure if Will could control Warren even if he wanted to.
I also loved all the details, like Warren's bodyheat. It made me want to curl up next to something warm ^-^
And I'm so in love with this fic that I don't WANT to find any fault in this. But when I'm feeling like being honest to myself I have to admit that the last part, the actual sex, bugs me. I'm conflicted by it. The flying was a little out of the woods for me, some way totally unnecessary, but in a way it also gave something extra to the scene.
I'm not sure if it's a bonus or a minus, so I think I'm just gonna go blind, close my eyes, and just love this fic.
Because it's so SHINY and pretty...
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The sky sex scene was pure gold.
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
happy dance: i never thought you would update. thank you. that was pure bliss!
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. i miss two chapter. LOL. i love it.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are an absolutely amazing writer! dont ever stop!!! Please update soon!
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i love this story...it's one of the best fanfics i've read in a long long long time. i can't wait to read the rest of it...hint hint ^_^
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! Please please please add more!!
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! are you adding more? it's amazing!