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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I DO hope you decide to continue this story, I adore it!
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please, please, please, please write some more!!!
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please please write some more of this great story, I love reading it so much. Hope you can find some time to add another chpter , I will keep checking :)
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it , the marriage was very unexpected....lol but i LOVE IT!! please write more, niceee :D
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lazy-ass Ventoux finally created an account here LOL.I really love your story,it's amazing; the humor is great and so very Jack, the smut is hot and both Jack and Liz are IC. Much more than in AWE IMO.
There are many stories(some which are great though) where jack and liz go off on another crazy adventure, magic, sea-monsters and whatnot insure and then they hook up.
A story without all the supernatural elements ,which instead focus on the characters and their relationship, are so re-freshing, no monster, no curses,(and best of all no Will) just Jack and Liz and the relationship between them onboard the Pearl.
Some times you don't need all kinds of crazy shemes, adventures and so on to create an interesting and good story and your story is a great example of just that. Looking forward to next update....
There are many stories(some which are great though) where jack and liz go off on another crazy adventure, magic, sea-monsters and whatnot insure and then they hook up.
A story without all the supernatural elements ,which instead focus on the characters and their relationship, are so re-freshing, no monster, no curses,(and best of all no Will) just Jack and Liz and the relationship between them onboard the Pearl.
Some times you don't need all kinds of crazy shemes, adventures and so on to create an interesting and good story and your story is a great example of just that. Looking forward to next update....
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was awsome .. i love what she asked for ...please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So wonderful! I hope you write again soon. I love this story and it just keeps getting better and better. I loved this chapter but I hope she has a baby soon. SO cute!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwh I loved this chapter, really felt Lizzie's pain when she thought Jack wouldn't marry her but then she did overreact. However I dont just think Jack would let her leave like he said, oh well, maybe he would...I dunno! I'm not sure if I want Lizzie to get pregnant or not, sure a little kid would be cute but...I dunno, might put a strain on their relationship. Im suprised she hasn't got pregnant already, maybe she can't get pregnant...? Hmm now there's a thought.
Great story, update soon!
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Great story, update soon!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I registered on this site just to review this chapter, because you truly deserve it. I love your full of humor style and your Jack is really awesome. Keep up the great work!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH I can't wait! I hope you find some time to write another chapter or two soon. I have finals next week and your story would be a much appreciated break from reality. Hope all is well ~freelke