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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww cuteness. He certainly does surpass all gender lines. Mmm...Jack. I eagerly anticipate more. HURRAH!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well written and cute as always.
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome,and hot i love it ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now ..
angel
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved the last chapter. It was hot and saucy yet....sweet. Is that even possible? :P Oh well, Jack was so considerate when she refused him, he really does love her. I wonder what suprise she has in mind for winning the bet? hmmm....I like the chapter where you said about Jack trying to refrain from sex because he might not have Lizzie forever. Bless him. He such a lover =D
Cant wait for the next chapter!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that was one hell of a chapter! But in a positive way!!!!!!! WOW! Very, VERY well done, hon'.
I wonder if she'll let him try again in the future - but somehow I'm sure she will, cause when Jack was your muse for this chapter, he'll come back a second time for a second chapter ;o)
PERFECT! MORE!!!!! And thanks so much for all the wonderful time you're giving us readers with your story.
Hoist the colours high!
~Sassy~
I wonder if she'll let him try again in the future - but somehow I'm sure she will, cause when Jack was your muse for this chapter, he'll come back a second time for a second chapter ;o)
PERFECT! MORE!!!!! And thanks so much for all the wonderful time you're giving us readers with your story.
Hoist the colours high!
~Sassy~
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, i just started reading this story a week ago, and i just finished, and i love this story,pleeeaaassssee write more :), cant wait
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I am so glad you wrote another chapter. It wasn't on my list of top 5 chapters, but I loved it anyway. Your writing is always wonderful. You never fail to impress :) I hope lizzy gets pregnant soon. My biological clock ticks so loud it keeps me awake at night :) I'm so glad you posted again. Please let there be another chapter VERY SOON. I don't know if I can wait another week!!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story lots. I hope you update again soon! :)
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee. So cute. I love how wicked and sweet they are to one another. More please sir!
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I know that I don't review every chapter but I wanted to say that this was freakin' awesome! I love your fic and I also read it on sparrabeth.com! You are a very talented writer and I cannot wait to read your next chapter! Keep up the fantastic work!