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by Jawala39

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh god! This last chapter was... wow... *falls over and dies*
person freelke
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY. Im so happy you wrote another chapter! "Jack's defensewas typical, he ran away"! HAHA that cracked me up! I loved this chapter, hope you already have the next chapter in your head. Thank you for updating so quick, I can barely wait until the next one. This story has such a unique quality I can't seem to get enough of. I'm glad you haven't tired of me nagging you for chapters :) I can't find a story as good as this one anywhere else. Please update again soon when you get a chance! It would make my day!
person freelke
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure you're probably tired of me by now, but I just wanted to say again how much I liked the last chapter you posted. I hope you find the time somewhere to write another chapter. I look forward to it!
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated so quickly! More more!
person freelke
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! it made my day, no my week. I really hope you have the idea for the next chapter already. I don't know if I can make it :) I almost died from the wait! Just kidding. I love this story and I hope you post more very soon. This is one of my favorite j/e stpries of all time, from all sites I've ever vistied. Thay could all learn something from this story! Please be kind and keep your muse happy ( here, muse have a cookie).
person Ziva
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was hilarious! Poor Jack. ;) I have no doubt who will win the bet. :D
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was precious and pleased me to no end. Some of the dialogue, especially in the earlier chapters sent me into fits of giggles. Hell, Jack alone at the beginning hiding with the rum was hilarious. And I love that he had to explain to her where babies come from. Heh. All pirates should be required to give sex ed classes to their beautiful but incredibly naive and on occasion rather vapid lady loves. Heh. Very enjoyable.
person freelke
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you find the inspiration to write another chapter soon, i've re-read the story so many times I can almost quote it :) I hope you post again soon, but it's worth the wait.
person freelke
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I got so excited again, I thoguth there was a new chapter. Which chapters have you been updating/changing?
person freelke
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I got so excited when I saw an update. Alas it wasn't a new chapter..... But I re-read the last chapter again anyway. This is one of my favorites