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by Jawala39

schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! I loved this chapter as usual, especially the part where Jack rescued the bird and finally told ELizabeth that he's in love with her! I thought it was very funny how he fell out of the tree in front of Elizabeth! Great job! Can't wait for more!
person freelke
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read it again, and I like it even more. You should cross post this to sparrabeth.com so more people can appreciate it. Hope you find a few minutes to write more :)
person freelke
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Im so happy you wrote another chapter. I know you are very busy, but it makes my entire week when there is a new chapter to this wonderful story. You're a great writer and I CANNOT wait till you post again. Please don't make it as long between chapters as before, I might die :)
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
JAWALA!!!

*thud*
person freelke
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DID i mention I love this story? More please,
person Vee017
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another amazing chapter! I love this story. It's very well written and definitely keeps my attention.

I love the splash of uncertainty the last two chapters had. their argument and Elizabeth wondering whether or not Jack still wanted her. Loved how you solved it. Only Jack could climb a tree naked to help a baby bird ^.^

Loved the ending. Jac would love Lizzie pregnant:)

I eagerly await your next chapter when you have the time.
person freelke
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you haven't update in like 100,000 years :( Just kidding I love this story I hope you decide to pick it back up. Its one of teh stries I check regularly for
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautifully done! I hope you continue this story very soon. <3
person freelke
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story very soon, its one of my favorites!
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww yay. :) Keep up the good work.