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by Jawala39

schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
I really enjoy how you portray their relationship!
person freelke
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter, hope you write more very soon. This is one of my all time favorite stories. Hope you don't plan on finishing this story any time soon. It should keep going forever
person shel
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooo i can't wait to find out what happens! please update soon!
i love this story
person freelke
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter please write another one very soon. I hate going so long without another chapter to read. you're a great writer~
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh! I hope she's not pregnant! I loved this chapter! I hope ELizabeth only has a stomach ache, but the idea of them both being parents is cute. Keep up the good work and update soon!
person shel
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEASE update! that was so sweet. Awesome chapter
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I cannot wait for more!
person freelke
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter as usual. I hope you update again really soon. It's a great surprise when there is another chapter posted.
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the last 3 chapters! The desk scene was too hot! I loved it! Write more please!!
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have i mentioned lately how much i love this story??