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by Jawala39

person rejerito
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
So cruel to stop there!!!
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Purple stick of DOOM!!! Get it right!!!

You left off at the spot I screamed at you for!!!!!!!!!! WHY?!?!?
person rejerito
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! And funny too!
YOU MUST WRITE MORE!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent. Have you written anything else - under a different name, maybe? If this was your first story, make sure it isn't your last!!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You heard them woman!! Don't make me get out my stick!!
person heartJD
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God.

This was... awesome! Your first fic? Wow! I hope you'll write more! :D