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by Jawala39

schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Keep it coming as soon as possible after the move! :D
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely the acme, the zenith, the epitome, the pinnacle of Jack and Lizzie stories

so glad to have these two new chapters, and once again so sorry that RL interferes with this greater good.

thank you for a lovely story!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I was so afraid you weren't ever going to update so let me just tell you how glad I am that you did. Yours is a truly exceptional JxE fic. Keep up the good work!
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're still working on this one. Chapter was lovely, looking forward to meeting the littl'un
person freelke
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been forever! I'm sooo glad you updated again. I've really missed this story. Thank you so much for keeping it alive !!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll start checking more regularly now. Thanks again!!
person Ventoux
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*melts* Jack has to be the sweetest guy ever. So considerate and trying to protect Lizzie and Jr. Hehehe, persuasion indeed. Good to see Lizzie coming around and taking a bit care of poor Jack (I can do that too you know *wink*) All in all, another great and lovely chapter about our fav couple who are soon to be parents - how soon btw? I can't wait to see if it's a boy or a girl...:)
Good to have you back and again, I'm sorry RL is being such a bitch *graps baseballbat and chases after RL*. Looking forward to the next chapter and thank for not abandoning the story, it's one of my favs.
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh thank you! How wonderful! And I hope your RL improves--perhaps by spending as much time as possible in the world of Lizzie and Jack, you might survive the realities pressing upon you! Take care--RPD
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahoy-matey--it be many weeks since ye added to yer story, and we be in want of more of it! Aye!

I do hope all is well with you--but I really do want to know how this all unfolds! Thanks--RPD
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I hope you update soon!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh---where's the next chapter?

are we gonna have to wait NINE MONTHS to know what happens next?

I myself prefer premature things---that instant gratification stuff, you know.

so--please!! MORE MORE MORE!! I love the dynamics you've established for Lizzie and Jack--can't wait to know about Jack as a Daddy.