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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh---where's the next chapter?
are we gonna have to wait NINE MONTHS to know what happens next?
I myself prefer premature things---that instant gratification stuff, you know.
so--please!! MORE MORE MORE!! I love the dynamics you've established for Lizzie and Jack--can't wait to know about Jack as a Daddy.
are we gonna have to wait NINE MONTHS to know what happens next?
I myself prefer premature things---that instant gratification stuff, you know.
so--please!! MORE MORE MORE!! I love the dynamics you've established for Lizzie and Jack--can't wait to know about Jack as a Daddy.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Jack and Elizabeth are so great together! Too bad Disney didn't see it that way though! Thanks for writting such a wonderful story!
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter:)
Poor things want this sooooo much and they end up talking stories and falling asleep,lol!
Hope it will change soon,though!Want some J/E goodness!And I pity Jack so much for having only his fist for a company:)
I admire your story,I strated reading in on sparrabeth website last summer ,and then found it here after discovering aff!It's one of the best J/E fics I've ever read,so please go on and update asap!!!
It's my first review for "Unforgivable" since I'm a new member:)
Poor things want this sooooo much and they end up talking stories and falling asleep,lol!
Hope it will change soon,though!Want some J/E goodness!And I pity Jack so much for having only his fist for a company:)
I admire your story,I strated reading in on sparrabeth website last summer ,and then found it here after discovering aff!It's one of the best J/E fics I've ever read,so please go on and update asap!!!
It's my first review for "Unforgivable" since I'm a new member:)
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. I adored Jack's little chat with his son, eh, daughter. Daddy Jack really melts my heart, he is soo sweet and huggable. I can't wait to see what happens once the baby is born (I'm with Lizzie, should be a girl *puppy eyes*).
Looking forward to the next update.
Looking forward to the next update.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as always--superb! this story is too wonderful--I await each new chapter breathlessly. Just please--let's have a happy continuance--no tragedies or disasters! Let them have a happy, horny life together!
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
such a gerat surprise to see a new chapter. Wonderful as always! I still adore every chapter of this story and I already can't wait for the next chapter!!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phooey, turns out your story doesn't fit the category for which I nominated it. Ah well, the thought was there... :/
I am looking forward to more of the J/E love from you...poor Jack needs a break. We don't see a lot of Heavily Pregnant Sex in fanfic...hmmm...not that I'd ever drop hints...no...
I am looking forward to more of the J/E love from you...poor Jack needs a break. We don't see a lot of Heavily Pregnant Sex in fanfic...hmmm...not that I'd ever drop hints...no...
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I nominated this story in the PoTC Votes awards in the Long Series category. :)
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haa haa haa, poor poor Jack. And Lizzie of course, but that's an uncomfortable given.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!!
being 5 months pregnant i can SOOOOOOOOOO relate LOL
keep up the good work hope to see another cahpter soon
Cheers
Sera
being 5 months pregnant i can SOOOOOOOOOO relate LOL
keep up the good work hope to see another cahpter soon
Cheers
Sera