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by Jawala39

person freelke
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH I can't wait to see what happens next. you have a real talent for creating suspense. I look forward to your next posting, whenever you have time. I still love this story :)
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah hurray more! Maybe Lizzie has PCOS like me. *shakes fist* Stupid bodies. Tell her to take some Metformin and call me in the morning. I eagerly await more. :-)
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED it! I thought it was hilarious how the midwife wanted to sleep with Jack for payment! Brilliant as always! Can't wait for more!
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwh, a lovely chapter. Haha Jack getting all annoyed at the female gossiping. I bet that's one thing Lizzie misses. I kinda guessed that's what would be up with her, life on a ship isn't teh most convinient and it often messed up the women's cycle.
Loved the chapter!
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schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adorable! Now go and write more, we all love this fic.
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this one! And I'm so grateful that you write often and add to the story. What a delightful development---although the image of Cap't Jack changing a diaper is a bit more than I can tolerate, frankly. Should be interesting!!
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I loved it. I love the passion between Elizabeth and Jack. They're such a cute couple.

Now, that midwife scared me. Too...weird. lol

Update soon, luv, yer doin' a great job!
person freelke
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! thank you ! It made my day getting to read a new chapter. I love reading this story and every chapter is better and better. I love your point of view and you write both personalities very well :)
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update! I'm checking each day.
person freelke
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter, the anticipation !!!