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I am absolutely in love with your story, it's like reading a real noir novel. Please. please continue.

I love this story, please update soon.

When I got home from work this evening to begin my usual reading I was absolutely shocked and thrilled to find that you posted a new chapter and even more surprised that you decided to dedicate it to me. Thank you so much. This is extremely nice of you and definitely helped lift my spirits after a terrible day. As for the chapter: Excellent!! Even through you have not posted in a month this chapter flows seamlessly with the others and is another confirmation of your writing abilities. I was not initially happy about Ben’s decision to go back to work for Senator Roarke but after reading how Shelly was able to deal with his presence I changed my mind; nice character development in showing her maturity. All in all wonderful chapter as always. Thank you again for the update and the dedication : )

Please update! I have been checking this every day since your last update and have only be met with the disappointment that you still have not added anything new. Please do not give up in this story it has been really excellent!

Thanks for the update! I really am enjoying this story but I must say I have not been able to decide where you are going with the plot, it seems like you have several options open and I am looking forward to reading more as you continue to develop the story. Nice work and I hope you can update again soon :)

Thanks for the update. I enjoyed the new chapter and will be waiting patiently for the next update!!

Well I have enjoyed this story so far I just hope you decide to finish it. It is obvious you have talent as a writer and I look foward to reading some of your other work.