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by Shalimar

schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God Shali, I can never get enough of deal series...Especialy the first chapter and this one...That part with Elders kills
me every time. God I'm such a 'ho'!!!

person aquamum
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must tell you that all your stories are great.......
person b9696
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i always liked this story and im glad you continued, i like ethe way u write. this is such an interesting story.
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was such a sad ending! Tell me they're going to get back together in a future sequal. I can't deal with the idea that he would just leave her! They were such a cute couple of horndogs.
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love what you've done so far with the fic and can't wait to read the next installment. Please update soon.
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still very much enjoy your unique writing style as well as the pairing of Kat and Chak. I am curious to know what is going to happen to Kat now, so I'll hope that you decide to continue on with the story.
person Keen
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By damn, I want to be like you when I grow up! Tight work as always.
person JulieL
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are still so naughty. But me still likes you. Can I be left in the room with the Elder's too, can I, can I? Please.