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for What she really wants?

by Apirateslifeforme

person Mistress Black
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing chapter :) Please continue!
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! And I'd love to read more so yes - please continue writing!
Hoist the colours high,
~Sassy~
person freelke
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love for you to continue this story, I have been reading it for so long, I would feel strange without it. Thanks for taking the time to write this wonderful story and I look forward to your next project, it will be great!
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue this one! Don't stop! And I'd love to see actually something hot between the two.... :oP
Please don't stop here - this story is far too good!
Thank ye, mate!
Ta,
~Sassy~
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No cookies and milk - I'll take the rum ;o)
I think you've find the perfect way to describe the situation as you wanted it to be - cause I love it that way! And your hard work really payed off.
Excellent work!!!!
Ta,
~Saskia~
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're bloody awesome!
I only want to hug you very tight for making my day with this wonderful chapter...
Thank you sooo much - I'm still grinning
~jacks_peapod~
person Ziva
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleaaase continue! You can’t end this story without giving us dessert! *pouts*
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ziva said it best i believe. *waiting patiently for rum and rest of story*
person Ziva
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lizzie finally remembers everything! I like your idea of Jack singing this song to Lizzie again while watching the sunset with her! It totally fits and it's a romantic idea, because the first thing she remembered was the first memory she and Jack shared as a real couple. I know my logig is kinda weird, people keep telling me that. I hope you understand what I mean anyways.
Oh, and thanks for the cookies, but you can keep the milk. ;)
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I loved this chapter! It was pretty sad, though, but good! I just hope Lizzie gets her memory back!

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