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hi my dear,
this was a wonderful chapter - but so sad! - I almost cried...
I know it sounds a little bit stupid, but I can't take it seeing them so hurt esp. Jack.
He doesn't deserve that - they both do not deserve that!!!
It is a bloody good story and I loved every word you've written! I have never reviewed because my English isn't good enough,
but today I was on a breaking point to let you know what I think. (BTW - I hope you'll understand what I want to say - reading is much more easier!!!!)
I can't wait too long for the next chapter and I really hope that everything get right.
Thanks for that,
yours stricy from Austria (Europe)

I liked the chapter, but I'm a little confused that Lizzie didn't understand that she and Jack were kind of together. I mean, she sleeps in his bed, he called her Darling when she woke up and he told her that she kissed him before she returned to the cabin before the storm.

I loved it! I really hope Elizabeth gets her memory back! Great job! update soon!

Lizzie seems to start remembering things, concidering her dream and the connection she feels towards the Pearl. That's a good sign. I hope she'll remember Jack soon.

Now this is going to be really sad.... not just that Jack has to wait a while longer - no, put that aside - but that they're both emotionally down....
What'll Jack do now to regain her memory? I'm so curious.
Please keep it up - you're doing excellent!!!!!!
Ta,
~Saskia~

Oh my! Now that's a twist in the story!!!! Poor Jack.... has to wait longer now ;o)
Please keep it up, I love it!
~Saskia~

Poor Lizzie and Jack. They are finally together and now that. I'm afraid Jack will have a lot more to explain to her. If she doesn't remember Jack she doesn't remember the Pearl either. How will Jack explain to her that she is on a Pirate Ship and that she's there on her own will? I wonder why she hasn't asked where she is yet.

*gasp* WHO COULD EVER FORGET CAPTAIN JACK!!!!???? The drama of it all! LOL Love it!! Cant wait to read more!

I absolutely loved your last chapter! Your fic keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work and update soon!!

I absolutely LOVE your story! I just got a chance to read it and I read all of the chapters! I couldn't stop reading! I can't wait for more! When will Jack and Elizabeth make love? I can't wait for that! Great job!