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by dmcintoshtx

person Kiboki
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I think it has to be one of my fovorite that you have written. One of the things that I keep thinking about is when Jack tells Ennis about the other guys he's been with. In each of your stories it says how much this hurts Ennis, but he never says anything about it. I think it would be nice to have a story where Ennis tell tell Jack how hurt he really was by it. Just a thought. Anyway another great story!