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for River Falls

by jemstone5

person jectex57
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read all of this series and really enjoyed them. This one does not seem as though it is finished, but could end where you left it. I did notice some spelling errors in all, though some could be explained as typos. There were also some words that were the right sounding but the wrong spelling.
All in all a most enjoyable series.
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Will this ever be updated? I read it all the time
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading every single one of your stories and I want you to know that they are FANTASTIC!! I absolutely love your writing style and skills and think that you should work on a book of your own, if you haven't already. =)
person Aimzy
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, jem! I was so excited to see that my suspicions about the smallest baby turned out to be true. I just love M'Pa, and it's great to see him get his heart's desire with El. I'm also very glad you didn't make us wait too long to find out the truth, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter- hope it will be SOON! :D
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, still quite an enjoyable story. I kind of figured that was the case with that one fussy child being M'Pa's, great dialogue as usual between all the characters. Oh, and nice to see a follow up with one of the human girls who came along back in Book 2, guess she's starting to learn her place, I wonder how the other one is doing? I wouldn't mind reading about their experiences becoming accustomed to their new environment.

Again, great job, I hope you'll continue :)
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww i think im gonna cry...keep it up!!!
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so glad that m'pa has a child. can't wait for more.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Props to Tyler, taking one for the team literaly. Poor Trivet being taunted by Kal too :)

I'm curious as to what's so suprising at the door, can't wait for the next chapter.
person Aimzy
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, jemstone! I was so happy to see El and M'Pa have a chance to talk alone. Can't wait to see when they get a chance to do more than just talk...if ya know what I mean... *nudge nudge* LOL I love this possessive side of M'Pa, btw. I think it shows the depth of the bond he's forming with El. I also have a theory about the smallest baby, and I'm hoping it turns out to be true and that we get to find out soon. Please, PLEASE update soon! *fingers crossed*

schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet chapter; Kal being able to retrieve Aubrey's furniture; El naming her babies and also comforting M'Pa. I just love it, jemstone. ^_^ Cannot wait for the next installment.