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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, please tell me there will be more....still enjoying this story very much.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome, keep it up!! what do they see???
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ver’On purred to the baby in his arms, surprised that it hissed back at him. M’Pa chuckled. “He’s challenging you for his independence already,” he chided. Ver’On purred even deeper, as the babies M’Pa was holding began to coo to the sound.
I think Ver'on is holding M'pa child and M'pa is holding Ver'on children. It would be good for everyone that way.
Really enjoying this story hope you update soon.
I think Ver'on is holding M'pa child and M'pa is holding Ver'on children. It would be good for everyone that way.
Really enjoying this story hope you update soon.
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm all worried about M'Pa now, lol. So, please...PLEASE...update soon. I'm hoping he gets some alone time with El soon... *nudge nudge wink wink*
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, the first time I checked this update, I completely missed chapter 3 :) What a mistake, cause that scene at the end was HOT!
Looks like M'Pa is starting to feel worse about his position, I wonder where this will lead?
Keep writing, you're so good! :)
Looks like M'Pa is starting to feel worse about his position, I wonder where this will lead?
Keep writing, you're so good! :)
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Chappie Jem.
Poor M'Pa. To feel that way and to have one of the pups hiss at him. Not good. I kind of wonder though when one of the pups hissed at Ver'On. HHHMmmmm. But I'm very glad El's going to be okay.
I hope Kal doesn't run into any trouble when he returns to get the table setting.
Loved J-on's line. "Oops, wrong one."
Poor M'Pa. To feel that way and to have one of the pups hiss at him. Not good. I kind of wonder though when one of the pups hissed at Ver'On. HHHMmmmm. But I'm very glad El's going to be okay.
I hope Kal doesn't run into any trouble when he returns to get the table setting.
Loved J-on's line. "Oops, wrong one."
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww i love it, keep it up..poor M'pa
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter three...
*faint*
wow.
:D
*faint*
wow.
:D
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Throws cute, big, watery "Puss-In-Boots" eyes over to Jem.
Please update. We miss you.
Please update. We miss you.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi jemstone! I signed up for an account just to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. Been following it since the beginning. I love all the characters, but especially M'Pa- he and El have great chemistry. *grin*
Please, please update soon! I've been in suspense for too long now, and I can't take it anymore, lol.
Please, please update soon! I've been in suspense for too long now, and I can't take it anymore, lol.