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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it...love it...love it!!!! Please don't let El die. The babies need her and so do Ver'On and M'Pa. I am anxious for the next chapter. ,,,=^..^=,,,
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Babies!!!!
Such a tragic blessed event. I hope El is going to OK. She deserves to be OK so much.
OYE!! Three boys. She's is going to NEED two mates to help take care of them, plus about a hundred more eyes and 500 more arms.
What's going to become of the cop, Tyler. Honestly, I don't think he can or should go with him. Maybe stay behind and take over Bastian's job. Get someone into the sheriff's office that isn't a corrupt arsehole.
As always, love and please update soon. Such wonderful writing.
Such a tragic blessed event. I hope El is going to OK. She deserves to be OK so much.
OYE!! Three boys. She's is going to NEED two mates to help take care of them, plus about a hundred more eyes and 500 more arms.
What's going to become of the cop, Tyler. Honestly, I don't think he can or should go with him. Maybe stay behind and take over Bastian's job. Get someone into the sheriff's office that isn't a corrupt arsehole.
As always, love and please update soon. Such wonderful writing.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally had the babies, but not out of the fire just yet. Poor El. I know what Kal has in mind to help save her. And I'm a little surprised at the third baby hissing at Ver'On. Very curious. Can't wait for the next update, jemstone.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. El's just gotta survive. I think I might be able to take a guess why Ver'On was hissed at, but I'm gonna zip my lip and wait and find out. And like Muse, I think I know what Kal has in mind.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, i love it....hope she wont die...better not...keep it up
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great. can't wait for more you've got me on the edge of my seat now.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, your writing just keeps getting more dramatic and better with each chapter. You can feel the tension going through the air in this one, and again, another cliffhanger-type ending. Interesting to note that one of the babies hissed at Ver'On as if he wasn't the father. Oh, I'm so eager to see where you will take this.
On a side note, I'm curious as to what happened to those two girls who came along with Chonie, how are they doing?
Wonderful story as always, never stop writing. :)
On a side note, I'm curious as to what happened to those two girls who came along with Chonie, how are they doing?
Wonderful story as always, never stop writing. :)
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dam jem, please hurry with the next chapter. The cliff hangers make me a nervous wreck. and please make El and the babies live, it would kill me to see something happen to them.
Ar'Shiya
Ar'Shiya
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a way to begin a new book. I was on the edge of my seat there. Glad to see you brought back the good cop Tyler to beat down the bad cop Bastian. You're also definitely a master of the cliffhanger ending, and I will wait with baited breath for your next chapter. Fabulous! :)
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so cannot wait until the next chapter. You are such the master of cliffhangers. And I'm glad Tyler was able to help El in her time of need.