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Not sure if I can still reach you here, but may I translate this wonderful piece of fic?

Yes, please do make more Jack and James stories with longer and more chapters. Gay copulation is HOT!

Your setting is very interesting, but you did a good job of pulling it off. I appriciate that you've paid such attention to Jame and Jack's character.

i want to see jack, james, and will get into a fight over elizabeth and end up in a yummy, piratical threesome. well, they can fight over anything, but they have to go from fighting to fucking. preferrably like cats in heat. ;) if its anything like punishment, ill be most satisfied. bonus points for two ganging up on one (jack sandwiched by will and james, *drools*)!

I'm intrigued by the idea of punishing norrington when james is feeling this way. he makes such a wonderful pirate, but that self-loathing gets in the way. yet...it works for him, you know? ideas for fic? hmm. I'll have to get back to you on that. personally, I like this. jack and norrington and all the ways one can debauch the other. *grin*

I think you're doing very well. Very good premise of Norrington needing punishment & turning to Jack. Liked the clever use of the knife in foreplay to get his blood going (so to speak). Hope you post more chapters. This has good slashy potential.