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for The Fine Line

by unknownsoldier

schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautifully done!!! I've been starving for some good Jack/Lizzie smut!
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it .. later for now

angel
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so happy that you're back! And this last chapter was simply amazing. Thanks so much for making my day - please keep up your excellent work.
Take care,
~Sassy~
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A second chapter :o) That was sweet and ... and... I simply love it! And it would be soooooo excellent to see even more of your wonderful story.
Please keep it up - I'm begging ;o)
~Saskia~
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im crying! Your story was amazing! It had the sweetness in it, but passion too. Emotions were great and Jack finally admitted he didn't just want to bed her and leave her. It was amazing and made me all teary eyed!
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was sweet! Especially the last sentences :o)
Was this a one-shot or will you write more about it?
Take care,
~Saskia~