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for Looking Out For Us

by Foxyglove

person draylon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! (Squealing with reverse-chronological excitement.) Your other story was a contiunation of this one! Loved this also. You did a very nice and effective job 'filling in the blanks' between the two films with this and I think your characterisation of Pintel & Ragetti is absolutely charming - Ragetti's slight uselessness and Pintel's grudging protectiveness of him. Really enjoyed the subversive element with the dog's name, and the Bible too. I'd love to read more if you're planning to do a follow-up on this.