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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far I've made it through chapter three, and a lot of it is coming back to me. I had a good laugh at the way they keep calling her one of ~those~ types, like she's shady or something. Maybe to them I suppose...
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course it was raining, stinging pellets that drove into exposed skin. That was to be expected he supposed, but just once he would like to face death without being soaking bloody wet.
That set the scene nicely for a great chapter, the tension and fear is palpable and the descriptions very vivid! Good to see Jack in his rightful element at the helm of his beloved Pearl.
That set the scene nicely for a great chapter, the tension and fear is palpable and the descriptions very vivid! Good to see Jack in his rightful element at the helm of his beloved Pearl.
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooo!! keep going 'mate! i'm bloody riveted. can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When the time is right all will be clear, there is no such thing as coincidence, all is as it should be…
I so understand Maia's frustration! Nothing worse than being told things will reveal themselves in good time when all you want is a clear answer...
Poor Jack. Not like him at all to be so bothered over a woman. Will be interesting to see how this all turns out.
I so understand Maia's frustration! Nothing worse than being told things will reveal themselves in good time when all you want is a clear answer...
Poor Jack. Not like him at all to be so bothered over a woman. Will be interesting to see how this all turns out.
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was all or nothing and if it could not be all then it must be nothing.
There's so much sadness in this chapter, both of them yearning for something that is just out of reach. The observation how Jack 'hadn't put on his public face' gives a revealing insight into his character and I love how you have given him so much more depth in this.
There's so much sadness in this chapter, both of them yearning for something that is just out of reach. The observation how Jack 'hadn't put on his public face' gives a revealing insight into his character and I love how you have given him so much more depth in this.
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a beautifully sensual chapter this was. A big step forward for both of them, giving that little bit more and abandoning themselves...
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Life had been much simpler before she had met Jack Sparrow.
I think Jack would agree that his life was much simpler before he met Maia... They definitely make an intriguing couple and I can't wait to see what happens next!
I think Jack would agree that his life was much simpler before he met Maia... They definitely make an intriguing couple and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic build up of the tension between the two of them and then things almost spinning out of control. Lucky thing Jack is so resourceful...
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your descriptions are so vivid that I can feel the oppressive quiet on and around The Black Pearl. Not looking like easy street for either Jack or Maya is it... Looking forward to seeing what comes next!
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As Jack might say: interesting, very interesting... The closer Jack and Maia get physically, the further away from each other they seem to get.
Seeking to slake a thirst that mere rum could not quench.
I love this sentence.
Seeking to slake a thirst that mere rum could not quench.
I love this sentence.