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by WantedRedhead

schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liked it. update soon please cant wait to see what happens next.
person freelke
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. Please get another one up soon. It keeps to character but keeps it interesting and original.
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love how you write Barbossa. He's such a bastard but he's smart as a whip. :D
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! They're almost reunited! :o) I wonder how Jack'll react at her.....
Please keep up your excellent work - I love it!
Take care,
~Sassy~
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! It was written very beautifully. I'm so glad that Liz passed the test and persevered through the threat of death. Yay they've found Jack!! Can't wait for more!
person JMaX
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great work with this story. Good use of the trailers. You do however, need a beta. Just simple mistakes that would be easily caught by a second pair of eyes. Constructive not critical.

Keep up the great storytelling!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow - very interesting chapter!
Hope you'll update soon mate - like your story very much!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this chapter was great! I love the idea of the windrose, very original. Can't wait for the next one! ;D
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start to the story! Can't wait for more!
person JMaX
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Do please continue!