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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on (the ending?). I want more! ;) How does it end?
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Jereth may have given her pleasure, but the jerk only gives her one lousy hour. Why not just keep her in his chambers, give up the kid and do the mating dance for the rest of their lives? Good story.
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, i like the overall story. But it really didnt do anything for me becouse i usually just read M/M or F/F but it was good none the less. there was one thing that i didnt like though and that is, Sara seamed Out of Character. but thats to be expected in stories like this.
I love you Baby Gurl!!! ^.^
I love you Baby Gurl!!! ^.^
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good for a first time! I would be interested to see more of this story. I think this is the first time that I've seen one that didn't wait until Sarah was at least 18 years old before continuing the story. I look forward to seeing if you write more!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finiah this? I like it!
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo Nice! Very good for a first timer! I mean in Labyrinth fiction. I keep seeing Jareth tempting her along theway, then in the end she still tells him no... lol, but then again I am somewhat twisted. Very nice writing, nice discriptions and nice getting Jareth into character. You Rock my friend
Hollilia
Hollilia
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one is excellent only real cristism i can offer is i want more make the sequel please.
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story, I'd say. I admit, I love Jareth to death.
But yes, overall, this was well-written and pretty in character, though I would say a bit rushed. But it's a oneshot, so I can't really complain. Anyway, keep writing!
But yes, overall, this was well-written and pretty in character, though I would say a bit rushed. But it's a oneshot, so I can't really complain. Anyway, keep writing!
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be more? This was very good!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot and I would love to read more. What happens next?! You can't just leave it a one shot. Please!!