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for Lighten Up Would Ye?

by PrimitiveScrewhead

person Midnight_Angel
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this!!!!!! The writing style, the way all the characters stayed in-character, the organ...gah!!! *blush* You made me laugh and fall in love along with these two sea-dogs. Thank you.
(I wish there was a way to put it into a favorites list...it would be in my top three!!)
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It's so much fun, one of the best Davy stories I've read!
person aldallia
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this the absolute best, hilarious, and all around AWESOME fanstory I have ever read!!!! I adore this story completely and am so glad to find someone else who enjoys Davy as much as I do ;D
person megf212
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC! Have my babies? Oh, I loved it. Loved it! Please write more Davy Jones fiction. Please!
person hollilia
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good sex scene!
person Kitty Devoire
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Major MAJOR squee! Omg this is an awesome fic! I love how she's kinda nervous about it but she just treats Davy like anyone else and then ending up in his lap?! Awesome! The boots on the head was a stroke of GENIUS I say and the smut is HAWT! Y'all gotta write more I'm tellin' ya ;)
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Gods. You rock!

I have a feeling that this story was probably as much fun to write as it was to read. Hopefully.

Hope you continue with this soon...there's just not enough good DJ smut on this site. :)
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was insanely hot. I loved all the detail you put into the card game. It was fantastic to have such a long leadup to the final act. And the ending was pure bliss. Thanks for posting this.
person Ophelia Immortal
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww. that was absolutely the best Davy Jones fic ever read....first: congratulations on realising D.J is not only hot, sensual and cute, but must not be called slimy or squid-face, second:so cute! ^.^ really happy, am quite delirious. Thanks honey.
Ophelia...Mooo XD(sorry couldn't resist, that bit had me laughing like hell)
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Moo. :D
thanks sweeties! I'm beyond happy you guys liked it as much as you did. I always worry. heh.
there is a prequel, but so far no sex. lol. it's a lot more, well, darker and brutal. it's for when she first got on the ship. the story after will have plenty o smut to make up for it. :)


organorganorgan!
*poof*