rate_review Reviews

This is very good so far! Morrien is a very interesting character! Her manner of speach reminds me of River Tam, I love it, even though it is hard to follow at times.

I like this a lot. I love the way she speaks and her whole attitude and I'm glad you're building up to the stuff with Vaako, gives me a chance to scope out her character. Please continue.

Just read what you've posted so far, its really good. Intersting story, very well written, your proses great and not difficult to understand at all. This is a real quality piece of work and you have definitely left me wanting more. If this were a book, I don't think I would put it down until the end. Please add more soon.