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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I just wanted you to know that I absolutely LOVE this story. Seriously. I've never read any of these fics, but yours was just... Amazing. You used awesome grammar, amazing hooks, and absolutely delicious detail and description. I am now one of your fan girls. =P Can't wait for chapter 3!
Yours truly,
Brittany Sambrano.
Yours truly,
Brittany Sambrano.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you and I think I want to have your babies. o.o
Seriously, though. There isn't much Michael adult fanfiction out there, and most of what does exist, is utter crap. Your story is absolutely splendid, it captures the essence of Michael perfectly, and is thoroughly a good read. I do commend you, and I simply cannot wait for the next chapter. Do keep up the good work.
Seriously, though. There isn't much Michael adult fanfiction out there, and most of what does exist, is utter crap. Your story is absolutely splendid, it captures the essence of Michael perfectly, and is thoroughly a good read. I do commend you, and I simply cannot wait for the next chapter. Do keep up the good work.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. I'm glad to know i'm not the only one who loves Mikey *heh*. I was tempted to write a story for this fandom but I don't think I could do Mikey justice like you have. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh dear god please make a sequal!!! i love this!!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So good!!! I dont even like the Halloween movies but this fic is sooooooo good! I cant wait to read more! Keep up the great work!!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>_< Damn, I know what you mean about dreams ending before the good stuff really starts. Happens to me on a frustratingly regular basis. The most recent example was Freddy, but Michael's been there before too.
Heh, I don't know if you did it on purpose or not, but it's cute that you named the ex-boyfriend Jason. Little nodwink, maybe? Or an opportunity to use the Michael's bigger than Jason bit? And before any Jason fangirls kick my ass, I do like Jason too. I'm meanest to the ones I love =p
When you do write more, I'd suggest you either proofread more carefully or get someone to proofread for you. Believe me, typos are the bane of my existence, no matter how many times I reread. I swear typo elves come into my computer and change things while I'm not looking. Anyway, I believe I saw some sentences that were duplicates of each other. It was... the part where he first shoves into her and holds there while she shivers, or there abouts.
Heh, I don't know if you did it on purpose or not, but it's cute that you named the ex-boyfriend Jason. Little nodwink, maybe? Or an opportunity to use the Michael's bigger than Jason bit? And before any Jason fangirls kick my ass, I do like Jason too. I'm meanest to the ones I love =p
When you do write more, I'd suggest you either proofread more carefully or get someone to proofread for you. Believe me, typos are the bane of my existence, no matter how many times I reread. I swear typo elves come into my computer and change things while I'm not looking. Anyway, I believe I saw some sentences that were duplicates of each other. It was... the part where he first shoves into her and holds there while she shivers, or there abouts.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit!!!!! That was fantastic please do a Sequel ASAP....