rate_review Reviews

Not bad at all. She's a kind of stereotypical character, but hey, what're you gonna do, you know?
Anyway, that back story about her dad was good. What you've got of the sex scenes thus far are tantalizing. Hooray for Freddy's super dream power cock. I bet anal would hurt like a bitch *evil grin*
Little bit of an issue with the lack of paragraphing between different people speaking, though. Once in a while (not in this one yet) it has made me have to go back a few sentences and think about who's saying what. Get's kind of disruptive, so be careful...
I'll be watching to see what happens next =)

I've just re-read this. I'm slightly puzzled how a girl or anyone in that matter can open their mouth wide enough to take in such a thick manhood - four inches. In my opinion I think 4inches thick is a little bit too much for anyone and I don't think any man can have a manhood that thick. Unless you are assuming that Freddy may use his dream powers to make his manhood that thick...etc

I know you may be thinking this is the weirdest review you've ever got! lol

This is a different story to the others I've read on the website. Rather good, dark and twisted.

mean place to leave off. keep it up tho

awesome, keep it up. i hope he doesnt hurt her

nice one i hope your going to keep it going