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for Healing the wounds of the heart

by Naira

person sunset20
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BITCH!!!!! I mean Elizabeth, of course, who else!! HOw can she... I mean really... I mean, God, she's realy just a selfish bitch!!! I HATE HER!! - ok, calm down... *breathes* sorry, she just drives me mad! Poor Will, I wish I could hug him!!! :(( Can you make Jack hug him for me? *wink* :D I bet you will make him hug Will anyway... haha Poor Jack too, BTW, but at least he knows how to help Will *giggles* I can't wait for more!! :D
person sunset20
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There... there... *points at Jack with shaking fingers* there... he almost said it!!! *giggles* See, Will, that's what you get wen you talk nonsense! Ok, I know that's not much of a threat. *giggles - I know I do that a lot :D*
Dear Naira (please tell me I got the name right!), may I remind you now of my earlier suggestion, which in the light of recent events seems even more sensible: THROW THAT BITCH OFF THE SHIP!!!! because A) she hurt my... Jack's Will badly and I'm quite sure that he would never even consider looking at her NOT pretty face again B) even if Jack doesn't, I DO CARE about James and I don't want this little bitch to ruin his life, and that's exactly what she would do in the end... So please reconsider your actions concerning that whore who presently is still happily spoiling the mood on the Pearl. Yours faithfully, a secret benefactor of Jack, Will and James :D
person Jags
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh bollox! you've got GOT to finish it! Please??? Pretty please? All the rum i've got and a cherry for every bottle!
person Jags
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aye, thank ye. Keep it up!
person sunset20
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Will *hugs him* But Jack you should know better than that, you should have know Will is not used to drinking, see, now he's drunk and you probably have to put him into your bed and let him sleep it off... on second thought, that doesn't sound THAT bad :D
Oh and just a suggestion: Kick Elizabeth off board as soon as possible, and there's no need to find a port for that, just push her into the water!!! *wink* :D
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's sad to think of Will getting sodomized and tortured,but it's good he has Jack.I'm eager to read more.Good job so far.
person sunset20
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Will!!! But Jack will help him, right? I love the story, please don't stop writing, I'd love to read more!! :D