schedule
June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
coulnt have said it better myself, but i always wondered why she is 'king' of pirates, im quite sue that both kiera and lizzie are women, shouldnt she be a queen?
schedule
May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
but what about when she dies. what wil he have then?
sry but thats the one thing i cant handle
but this helps settle my heart a little. thatnk you
sry but thats the one thing i cant handle
but this helps settle my heart a little. thatnk you
schedule
May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story! And I totally agree with your mini rant, got to love LizxWill! Seriously you have a nice writing style, I usually cant stand 1st person POV but this was great. :) Hopefully you have more stories I can read, I enjoyed this one very much.
Only one thing to critique and that is: One scene cut explained that if Calypso had greeted Davy Jones after his ten years of ferrying dead souls, then he would have been freed of his duty: in turn, Will is freed of his captaincy as Elizabeth remains faithful to him ten years later <-- from the potc livejournal community
Only one thing to critique and that is: One scene cut explained that if Calypso had greeted Davy Jones after his ten years of ferrying dead souls, then he would have been freed of his duty: in turn, Will is freed of his captaincy as Elizabeth remains faithful to him ten years later <-- from the potc livejournal community