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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow beckett had it comming to him for all the evil thing he had done.
I think the original ending is amazing and took me by suprise.
I look forward to rading more of your work
I think the original ending is amazing and took me by suprise.
I look forward to rading more of your work
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Fantastic story! I simply just loved it, it's right up my alley! Too short though, with only six chapters....Got goose bumps all over just from reading what I would call a true piece of art. Your fluid and graphic language here is cutting edge. I wish I could write like you do. I enjoyed your little twist there with the Turners. Nicely done! Like I said, I only wished that you could have added some more chapters, perhaps elaborated more or something. It was way too good to be so short.
Take care
Sparrowbirdie
Fantastic story! I simply just loved it, it's right up my alley! Too short though, with only six chapters....Got goose bumps all over just from reading what I would call a true piece of art. Your fluid and graphic language here is cutting edge. I wish I could write like you do. I enjoyed your little twist there with the Turners. Nicely done! Like I said, I only wished that you could have added some more chapters, perhaps elaborated more or something. It was way too good to be so short.
Take care
Sparrowbirdie
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! Nice story!
-D.D.Darkwriter
-D.D.Darkwriter
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You could make the chapters longer. You should update soon though.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the two last chapters are the same thing
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
again i must go MWAHAHAHAHA in Beckett-torture Glee. :D