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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting concept. I like the story and I'm quite curious as to what will happen next, especially to see what will happen when Will and Jack meet. Also, I'm wondering a little how they look like now. Or at least, Jack, for the others it would pretty much be a change of clothes, but in his pirate get-up, he would be quite the oddball in modern times; though I love his hair anyway. It's not really critique but perhaps a suggestion for a little more description, if you don't mind =)
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh! i want some more :D this whole set-in-the-future-ish-thing is very interesting. keep it up!
could you email me when you update? (kobraz@hotm...) thanks!
could you email me when you update? (kobraz@hotm...) thanks!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love! More!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I look forward to more.
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such an interesting and realistic take on the whole "moving historical characters into the present day" subgenre of fanfic. Please update this soon! It is so good!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAARRRRGGGGHHH!!!!!!
You stopped it when it was getting really good!This sounds like a great beginning to an awesome story.I'm looking foward to reading it.BTW-you captured Calypso perfectly.I heard her voice in my head when I read the words.Good job! :)
You stopped it when it was getting really good!This sounds like a great beginning to an awesome story.I'm looking foward to reading it.BTW-you captured Calypso perfectly.I heard her voice in my head when I read the words.Good job! :)