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for Five Lashes

by NocensLupus

schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
holy shit! loved it, totally canon, especially the ending <3
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, I think you stayed in character with Jack and Will very well. Good job!
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this fic has to be one of the best I've read in a while. The sex was seriously hot, and I loved the allusions to the lashes. Wonderful job!
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! And it's unusual to read someone in the Jack/Will slash arena who lets Will be the aggressive one. It's a refreshing change from the typical tendency to make Will meek and innocent. Thanks for writing this!
person Kilcodo
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and heavy. Loved it!
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job!And gave me several visions to ponder before bed tonight...
person Extraho
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, dont let that be the end! you could get a mighty tasty story out of that. i love a darker Will and A sub Jack, i always imagine him quitre lithe and kind of delicate, dont know why though, probably 'sparrow'.

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