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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great two chpaters, I loved Jacks last line. I also enjoyed the Will/Elizabeth stuff which I usually dont. Kudos to you! Keep writing, let Jack forgive her ;) Please??
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice rewrite! I hope you continue!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, she does deserve it. i wouldn't be so chummy with someone who not just tried, but actually succeded in killing me! and it hurts more when it was someone you cared for who did it, i guess- noone ever tried to kill me as far as i know
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far!!! Are you going to continue it soon?
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start for your first POTC-fanfic! And it's a sparrabeth-one :o))))))
Please update soon, I'd like to read whre you'Re taking this story, thanks.
Hoist the colours high!
~Sassy~
Please update soon, I'd like to read whre you'Re taking this story, thanks.
Hoist the colours high!
~Sassy~
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful. I enjoyed the first chapter, I hope you have another one up soon. good job in keeping everyone in charachter
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's great beginning! You have Jack and Tia's voices perfect! I'm looking forward to more!