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for Gasping for Air

by astsweetheart18

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god! I thought that he killed her! Whew... just a nightmare:)
I definitely developed an interest in this fic.Great writing!
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You scared me so much this time! Didn't expect another,even worse nigtmare.^^ Keep goin',lv.I like it.
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so short!Write longer chapters please.it's so good.Do they share same dreams actually? Keep going!!!
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack,poor Lizzie.They should meet! If not ,they will both go crazy from these dreams.
Please update as soon as you can.This is so addicting^^.
person mary
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!I love it!!!Please update soon.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow....wonderfully written so far!! Can't wait for the next chapter dear!!

JackSparrowsWench
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good! Great! Please I need more ;)...
person Leanne
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE keep going!!!! its nice to know that Jack doesn't want to do that...I hope they meet...even though it so dark and violent...its also amazing...but they are just dreams..and anyways my main point....PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS STORY!!
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updated. Im curious to see where these dreams lead. Are the two going to meet up again, will Jack end up killing Lizzie? Can she atone for her mistakes? Will he believe her? Update update update! I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
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person Leanne
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the hatred and forced kisses, and the regrets!!!! please update, I've been checking everyday only to find only 2 chapters...again...I know you won't dissapoint!!! amazing story!!!