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for Gasping for Air

by astsweetheart18

person Persia
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oy! More please! How deliciously sadistic!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lizzie! That was really a dark dream. And you should continue that one - Lizzie and Jack deserve a better end - a happy end!
Thanks for sharing it with us readers.
Take care,
~Saskia~
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... that was good. And scary. And I love Jack's parting line, that was brilliant!