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for As man hath caused a blemish...

by EleniD

schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh i hate that woman!!! theres a scene in the 3rd movie that makes me want to bitch slap her. and if you have seen it you know what im talking about. i cant wait to see what happens next
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dont you DARE touch a WORD!!! its probably one of the best smut scenes with our dear Captain Jones that i've ever seen and the stip thing was hilarious. keep it up and throw another one of these in here.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT. Super hot.

Bravo!

More? :3
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PS: The song "Getting to know you" is now stuck in my head. Damn.

Still doesn't ruin the hot, though.
person hollilia
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! Yay! You rock my socks right off! And into the sea! Very well written, very nice contrast. i loved the way you described the tentacles! Agh! I must read it again!
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Challengy undressing is FUN!
Snip!
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well that ass got what he deserved. haha shes wearing the captains shirt. interesting updates. so his tastes swing the other way huh? okkayy i get it. keep it up mate
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Asskicking! good!
thank goodness for Wiggs.
hehehe i love it when davy's growly...
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
owies, i feel sorry for her...almost, she DID assult the captain. shes a firey one and i hope things between them get heated soon
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is the second fic in the past two days I've had to walk away from for a few minutes to compose myself... I was laughing so damned hard at the imagery of her fixing his coat and adjusting it and all that... and that totally baffled look on his face as she did so... hoo!

OH my...
I just ran up to stir my macaroni squeeling 'oh my god she slugged him!'
hahaha

At least she's got some backup... hehee, wiggsy :P