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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOoo! More! More lovely Barbossa sex! lol. I love the roughness. I've always imagined he'd be...well, not gentle man. Mmm...Love it!
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
urg. do you want some helpful critique? I don't like to do that, because people usually take it the wrong way. but, I love this story. it's so dark, I am in love...but, at the same time, there's something missing. mmmm. maybe some deeper characterization? I feel like the characters are very one-dimensional. if you can dig into the character's reasons/rationales, it would make this story so spicy. make the reader become part of the story through caring why this is going down.
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH HOLY HELL! BUGGERIN BLEEDIN HELL! ~goes silent, speechless~ keep up the good work
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! It's so nice to see other people exploring the darker side of sexuality, makes me feel less alone! And you managed to maintain the integrity of the characters, so good job!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO GOOD! More please! More angst more sex more! ...pretty please?